The poem I loved.
By: Susan Polis Schutz
Lean against a tree
and dream your world of dreams
Work hard at what you like to
do and try to overcome all obstacles
Laugh at your mistakes
and praise yourself for learning from them
Pick some flowers
and appreciate the beauty of nature
Say hello to strangers
and enjoy the people you know
Don’t be afraid to show your emotions
Laughing and crying make you feel better
Love your friends and family with your entire being
They are the most important part of your life
Feel the calmness on a quiet sunny day
and plan what you want to accomplish in life
Find a rainbow
and live your world of dreams
S- The subject is your dreams; make them come true. Don’t be afraid.
O- The occasion is the poet giving her audience advice about how to reach their dreams.
A- The audience of this poem is people who want to reach their dreams.
P- The purpose is to get people to live a happier life and also to inspire them to accomplish their dreams in life so they won’t live life with regrets; because I bet when peole achieve their goals, they get very happy.
S- The speaker is a person who wants to give advice to people so they can live a happier life.
TONE- The tone of this poem is content, inspiring, blissful, optimistic, etc.
This poem actually includes a little of personification. It has some “near rhyme”. It actually doesn’t have any stanzas. Susan uses imagery that I absolutley enjoyed.
I found the picture at: http://www.telegraph.co.uk/earth/graphics/2007/08/14/dream.jpg

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